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July 23rd, 2010, 1:05 am

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Reply GabrielsThoughts, July 23rd, 2010, 2:04 am

I kinda like and don't like your comic at the same time. It reminds me very much of Darren Shan, and I found the introduction of the story very gripping. the only problem I have with your comic is that it seems like it is all effect without cause. I think if you showed the action taking place as it is happening or more importantly in conjunction with what you are already doing with it's effects on the environment and the people who are part of the events, you would have comic gold. Another thing I dislike is the lack of environment, and the extreme close ups of characters faces... but cinematically it works since low budget productions generally use close ups to hide the lack of sets. So you've already learned a professional movie making trick. your writing is exceptional, and I kind of like the sketchy style you use.

Reply Boshedagh, July 23rd, 2010, 2:33 am

Thank you for your comment. C: The reason why we draw close ups and have a lack of environments is because we have little time in the day normally to work hard on stuff like that. This is a summer break comic and trying to fit a full book in a few months along with other summer activities is very tough. We try to do them when we have time though. DX Maybe if we get more time, we will become more elaborate with the backgrounds. As for the more intense story line or meaningful story line, it's coming very soon. Once again, thank you for your comment. You have made excellent points.

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