Mr. Grimm's 2- page 87

August 16th, 2013, 7:04 pm

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Reply Boshedagh, August 16th, 2013, 7:04 pm

Yup, that thing that keeps coming out of Morte's shoulder is a parasitic creature. More on that later. :P

Sorry for the terrible delay... Had some RL drama but things are calming down a little now.

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@Manga-ka: As always, thanks for the input. :D

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User's Comments:

Reply GothicRoses, August 16th, 2013, 8:01 pm

*0* This is so awesome!!! But there are so many little sidetracks in the plot. The art is amazing though :P

Reply Munchy5, August 16th, 2013, 9:14 pm

oh shnikes, a parasitic demon, how will our hero get out of this one!?

Reply Jackie (Guest), August 17th, 2013, 3:11 pm

I gotta agree with Roses up there. I love the artwork and the main idea (circus of horrors lol) but the author really has to get her (or his O.o?) mind in check. There are too many sidetracks in the story for us too really know anything about our MCs. Like, we found out Lucia had a brother and a mom and they're dead. BAM! holy shit Lucia's brother is ALIIIIVE!!! I don't wanna sound rude or anything (I write fanfiction all the time lol so I know my shit) but once you finish up this demon parasite thing, please try to take a breath and THOROUGHLY go through the backstories and personalities of the MCs, cuz you keep adding on more and more things without any explanation, and eventually you'll have too much shit to sort out!!! So plz, plz, for the sake of the story, prioritize! I've made the same mistakes before, so I'm not being a naive dipshit or anything. Sorry if I was harsh but it needed to be said

Reply u_queen, August 19th, 2013, 7:25 pm

To me the story is making some sense, if you consider how many years this has run it's easy to forget some parts of the beginning. But I'm grateful that the author's didn't decide to start it all over again, because most times it blows going forward with the story.

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